I’ve added more updates.
From: Ram Mohan [mailto:rmohan@afilias.info]
Sent: Monday, October 5, 2015 1:44 PM
To: Mark Svancarek; Don Hollander; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger; kurt@kjpritz.com; judy.song@neustar.biz
Cc: UA-discuss@icann.org
Subject: RE: UA Fact Sheet
I made extensive edits on top of Mark’s changes.
I’m cc’ing the full UASG distro, it’s useful to get more eyes on this.
-Ram
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From: Mark Svancarek [mailto:marksv@microsoft.com]
Sent: Monday, October 05, 2015 1:00 PM
To: Don Hollander <don.hollander@icann.org>; Ram Mohan <rmohan@afilias.info>; Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka@verisign.com>;
Brent London <brentlondon@google.com>; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA) <Carolyn.Nguyen@microsoft.com>; Christian Dawson <dawson@i2coalition.com>;
Richard Merdinger <rmerdinger@godaddy.com>;
kurt@kjpritz.com;
judy.song@neustar.biz
Subject: RE: UA Fact Sheet
My edits and comments are in the document. I’m not seeing my own redlining, so hopefully y’all will be able to see what I changed.
I do think it’s clear enough right now [as edited by me ;-) ].
/marksv
From: Don Hollander [mailto:don.hollander@icann.org]
Sent: Monday, October 5, 2015 12:08 AM
To: Ram Mohan; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Mark Svancarek; Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger;
kurt@kjpritz.com;
judy.song@neustar.biz
Subject: UA Fact Sheet
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8/edit
The above link refers.
We have been working to get this document ready for some weeks now. We took the original text that was used during the ICANN meeting in Toronto and have been massaging it.
There’s still no clarity and precious little time left to a) format it and b) print it. But, I think it may still be possible.
Your prompt review and, if necessary, revision would be very welcome.
Once this is done, then we can also work to get it prepared for the IGF - including getting some translation done.
Thanks so much.
Don
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