[[--Translated text (en -> es)--]] Asunto: Re: RECORDATORIO: Solicitud de Comentarios: Proyecto de At-Large Declaración de la Visión - Fecha límite para observaciones 17 de mayo De: cintra.sooknanan@gmail.com Hola a todos, Gracias por hacer circular este proyecto de Declaración de la Visión. Me hubiera gustado que ver a un lenguaje claro y sencillo y fácil de traducir la visión. Frases al igual que "aporta su voz a tener en todos los asuntos de la ICANN" son vagos en mi opinión. Declaraciones de visión debe tener un mecanismo de medición en cuanto a si se están cumpliendo o no y por lo tanto debe ser precisa. También me parece que es inepto para el ALAC a ser la primera estructura mencionada en el En una declaración de visión grande. Tal vez la intención es la mezcla de los dos? Pero Yo aconsejaría en contra de esta ruta, y en su lugar sugieren proporcionar una visión Declaración del ALAC por separado. Mi propuesta modificada de At-Large Declaración de la Visión es: * La comunidad At-Large, cataliza y facilita incluyente, tangible e participación significativa de los usuarios finales de Internet en todo el mundo en materia de ICANN, en particular mediante su trabajo en el fortalecimiento de las Organizaciones regionales de alcance, su la representación por el ALAC y su selección de la ICANN At-Large Junta Miembro. Saludos cordiales Cintra Sooknanan El mar, 15 de mayo de 2012 a 18:12, de la ICANN At-Large Personal < staff@atlarge.icann.org> escribió:

Dear All,

A friendly reminder that the comment period for the proposed At-Large Vision Statement closes on Thursday, 17 May.

The proposed At-Large Vision Statement is:

* The ALAC and At-Large community catalyzes and facilitates inclusive, meaningful participation of Internet end-users world-wide, aggregates their input and brings their voice to bear in all ICANN matters.

Please use the comments function on this <https://community.icann.org/x/esPbAQ> wiki page to add any suggestions or send your comments to At-Large Staff at: <mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> staff@atlarge.icann.org.

Regards,

Heidi Ullrich, Silvia Vivanco, Matt Ashtiani, Gisella Gruber, and Nathalie Peregrine

ICANN Policy Staff in support of ALAC

E-mail: <mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> staff@atlarge.icann.org

From: ICANN At-Large Staff [mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org] Sent: Friday, May 04, 2012 2:10 PM To: alac-announce@atlarge-lists.icann.org; 'afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org'; apralo; Discussion for At-Large Europe; LACRALO discussion list; 'lac-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org'; NARALO Discussion List Cc: 'Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond'; 'Cheryl Langdon-Orr'; ICANN At-Large Staff Subject: COMMENTS REQUESTED: Proposed At-Large Vision Statement

Dear All,

The ALAC Improvements Review WG Final Report included a recommendation that "the ALAC should develop strategic and operational planning processes (including performance criteria and cost information) as part of ICANN's planning process." (Recommendation 5 <https://community.icann.org/display/Improve/Recommendation+5> ).

As part of the implementation of this recommendation, the At-Large Improvements Implementation Work Team C created an action item to "articulate ALAC's and At-Large's vision and mission."

The At-Large Improvements Taskforce developed a proposed At-Large Vision Statement during their meeting at the 43rd ICANN Meeting in Costa Rica.

The proposed At-Large Vision Statement is:

. The ALAC and At-Large community catalyzes and facilitates inclusive, meaningful participation of Internet end-users world-wide, aggregates their input and brings their voice to bear in all ICANN matters.

Olivier Crepin-Leblond, Chair of the ALAC, and Cheryl Langdon-Orr, Chair of the At-Large Improvements Taskforce, have outlined the following next steps for the proposed At-Large Vision Statement:

. 4-17 May 2012 - This proposed At-Large Vision statement is open for comments between 4-17 May 2012. Please use the comments function on this wiki page <https://community.icann.org/x/esPbAQ> to add any suggestions or send your comments to At-Large Staff at: staff@atlarge.icann.org.

. 21 May 2012 - The At-Large Improvements Taskforce will review and incorporate comments received during their 21 May meeting.

. 22 May 2012 - The ALAC will review the proposed At-Large Vision Statement during their 22 May ALAC meeting and vote whether to ratify it.

Regards,

Heidi Ullrich, Silvia Vivanco, Matt Ashtiani, Gisella Gruber, and Nathalie Peregrine

ICANN Policy Staff in support of ALAC

E-mail: staff@atlarge.icann.org

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